Comments on: Deifilia http://www.rabbitwife.com/deifilia the hands of mary ann and jesse Sat, 19 Feb 2011 20:11:00 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: Tabi http://www.rabbitwife.com/deifilia/comment-page-1#comment-28 Tabi Mon, 02 Mar 2009 22:52:09 +0000 http://www.rabbitwife.com/?p=121#comment-28 This story is loaded with feeling. The heavy swing from bitterness to ecstasy, and then the abrupt break to bitterness is just genius. Your story really made me feel all kinds of emotions as I read it. Excellent. You have a strong grasp on the destructive cycle of machismo, by the way, right down to how the relatives treat women. You hit it dead on. This story is loaded with feeling. The heavy swing from bitterness to ecstasy, and then the abrupt break to bitterness is just genius. Your story really made me feel all kinds of emotions as I read it. Excellent.

You have a strong grasp on the destructive cycle of machismo, by the way, right down to how the relatives treat women. You hit it dead on.

]]> By: Cassandra http://www.rabbitwife.com/deifilia/comment-page-1#comment-27 Cassandra Mon, 02 Mar 2009 05:01:34 +0000 http://www.rabbitwife.com/?p=121#comment-27 apologies accepted ;-) I liked the story! I was wondering though, if you wanted to change kaleidoscope light to kaleidoscopic light? maybe not. it was the only thing that momentarily jarred me from the story back to reality. apologies accepted ;-) I liked the story! I was wondering though, if you wanted to change kaleidoscope light to kaleidoscopic light? maybe not. it was the only thing that momentarily jarred me from the story back to reality.

]]> By: greg http://www.rabbitwife.com/deifilia/comment-page-1#comment-26 greg Mon, 02 Mar 2009 04:57:42 +0000 http://www.rabbitwife.com/?p=121#comment-26 wow... this is tremendous. You have a real talent Mary Ann. wow… this is tremendous. You have a real talent Mary Ann.

]]> By: Mary Ann http://www.rabbitwife.com/deifilia/comment-page-1#comment-25 Mary Ann Mon, 02 Mar 2009 04:33:09 +0000 http://www.rabbitwife.com/?p=121#comment-25 Thanks to Tabi for the picture, taken in Santiago, Chile. Apologies for the high word count--a little over 1200--and my very narrow knowledge of both Chilean and Catholic culture. Thanks to Tabi for the picture, taken in Santiago, Chile.

Apologies for the high word count–a little over 1200–and my very narrow knowledge of both Chilean and Catholic culture.

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